Thanks for your feedback it is really helpful. Yeah I took that bit out for now to see if anyone else works out what's happening. As I'm trying a slow reveal story I want it to suddenly become clear what it's about. Do you think that last sentence makes it all clear?
Hello backatcha Miss Kathleen ~ I realize now you've been writing all over the scene and that makes me feel almost as good as finding you again ... though I truly DO wish to meet up with you in Mystic - I do.
Funny (well - no such thing as a coincidence), I got a notice from Editors Unleashed about that same contest today and earmarked it to check out later when I got to reading all my readings. Most definitely a HEARTY*YES to step into some essaying with You. I'll bring my sharpened #2 Ticonderogas and meetcha at the big oaken desk in the library. You'll sneak in chocolate chip cookies for us, won't you?
SO GLAD TO FIND YOU AGAIN -- interesting what can be *zinged'up* come Halloween! (My notes on your writing you sent me, coming to you by separate e'mail. I have a collaborative piece with Harry up at Michael Solender's "NOT" Wednesday, and a movie - dame - reel'classic nonfictionary muse tonight at the 6 @ 6:30 - would be interesting what "classic thrills" you happen to have, if you check it out.)
Hey - are you over at Sphere yet? Good for your writing output and farther-further reachings. Best to all your zest serene Kathleen the sometimes scary ... Absolutely*Kate
I intended to wish you a Happy Birthday on your actual birthday. Then life got all in the way with little unplanned incidentals and for days I have been kicking myself. Why am I kicking myself? I think you would still accept my wish for a wonderful new year. Happy Birthday this year, Kathleen.
I brought you a drink, too. With an orchid.