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What can YOU say in six sentences?
Your Disappearance
Mistakes were made. The next day, your driver’s license—nothing else--- washed up on the beach. Most accidents happen within 5 miles of home. On the payroll, there were people who knew how to do the kinds of things people are not supposed to do. As I was silently reciting your name, angels bristling with unexpected interest, looked down. There is no such thing as chance, especially in love and war.
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Comment by bolton carley on June 23, 2011 at 5:09pm -
i noticed the angels bristling, too! i like the conciseness of this as it still says so much.
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Comment by Gita on June 23, 2011 at 7:54am -
angels bristling..... now there's an unexpected subject-verb pairing!
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Comment by Sandra Davies on June 23, 2011 at 12:46am -
Powerful. And the fifth sentence especially invigorating.
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