Sweet revenge

I almost tasted

but you were already broken.

You robbed me with your weakness

on the day I was finally brave enough

to challenge you.

I didn't get to win.

I didn't get to rub it in.

Even your surrender demeaned me.

 

I hate you and the reflection haunts me.

 

 

 

 


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Comment by Angela on November 2, 2012 at 5:56pm

Don't quite know how to comment, but I feel you wanted to be heard more than you wanted to know what everyone thinks about it.  So, I heard what you said.

Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on November 1, 2012 at 10:24am

Wow! This is tough. Unfortunately,  many of us understand. So much passion in such few words.

Comment by Gita on October 31, 2012 at 7:54pm

As Stephen said, difficult to comment on partly because it is so far from my own realm of father experience.  But yeah, there's no satisfaction in defeating a deteated man, damn him.  

Comment by Stephen Torelli on October 31, 2012 at 3:52pm
This is difficult to comment on but since I'm here, when guys like that disappeared we never asked questions. You seem to be resilient, and hopefully so.
Comment by Robert Crisman on October 31, 2012 at 2:09pm

A whole lot of fathers and sons like that in this world.

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