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this isn't my life
woke up at eloise's. thought i'd start my day early but even getting up at 2pm felt like an accomplishment. recently decided (again) to stop smoking weed. scapegoating it for my inability to get out of bed in the morning. black woman next to me just got off at west fourth and i slid into the end seat, into her butt warmth. can't say i don't like it. yesterday i'm not sure when i got up but the subway clock on my morning commute said 11pm.
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Comment by Ali Znaidi on February 21, 2013 at 12:01pm -
Nice work
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Comment by Other on February 21, 2013 at 10:51am -
I like your morning commute being 11pm. Wraps it, perfectly. I'm a little choosey about butt warmth but some could be thrilling. Changing seats in the poker room ain't necessarily so. I carry a seat pad.
Neat six. Glad to see your writing, again. Love it.
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Comment by Crista Ramone on February 20, 2013 at 8:52pm -
Ah, butt warmth. You never felt intimacy until that moment. Good job.
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Comment by Angela on February 20, 2013 at 7:42pm -
Have experienced the joy of someone else's butt warmth, I confess. I like your voice here, telling it, but not telling it all. Nice work.
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Comment by Robert McEvily on February 20, 2013 at 1:21pm -
More kudos for the butt warmth line. Love that.
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Comment by bolton carley on February 20, 2013 at 12:15pm -
everyone has their own version of accomplishment. love the term butt warmth. definitely lots of voice here.
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Comment by Joey Delgado on February 20, 2013 at 11:09am -
Love the writing, here. Feels completely unfiltered and honest. Hey, there's nothing wrong with enjoying butt warmth. I've felt the same way. Good six.
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Comment by Gita on February 20, 2013 at 11:04am -
whether it is or it isn't, the telling is nicely wry and just a little bit scary.
getting out of bed is a bitch, some days.
good Six.
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