The Winters Dry

[mal]

As the dryness of a cold winter arrives

a geranium wilts in the Pub window,

Through the silky skylight, a Possum"s

paw print impacts on the moon.

While the dampness of the night imitates

the dragon within , a childs breath.

Since the winter moon magnifies a

smudged fingerprint on the ink stone....

[James Storbacon]

How every section connects with the following, in substance and visual connection, I too agree with the amount I can conjure up in my own imagination by reading this only once, that of couse created by your own imagination.

[mal]

Once my work load at college settles down I hope to write at 6s on a much more regular basis , as I really do miss it & all my great friends as well - Thanks all.

[mal]

Thankyou all so much for your great comments .

[Lydia]

So nice poetry Mal; Wonderful : Since the winter moon magnifies a smudged fingerprint on ink stone...
Ciao

[i am 'me']

its beautiful.....makes me see and feel the winter...

[lifeisbeautiful03]

nice imagination MAL gd 1!

[Sandra Davies]

This is a truly lovely piece of writing with vivid and original imagery - its visual impact makes me want to make a print or drawing of it because I can see colours so clearly in it.