The Two of You

Do you know how you make her feel? The butterflies that you send deliciously spinning around her stomach? The goose bumps you give her when your arm brushes against hers? How about the fact that even when she’s running away from the world, you’re still on her mind?

You take away the feeling of hurt that she keeps hidden in her heart; you take away the sadness that she stores in her soul.

More importantly, she does exactly the same for you.

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Comment by Smriti on July 22, 2009 at 2:36pm
This is precisely the feeling called love, I have felt it and I agree.
Comment by Kathleen Gilbert on May 8, 2009 at 6:51am
Wow this is beautiful.
Comment by Olive Rosehips on May 8, 2009 at 6:23am
late to the party but you certainly did a wonderful job here decorating with all of your words.
Comment by Wendy on May 7, 2009 at 7:08am
Little Roo, this is wonderful writing. You have such a talent!
Comment by RoseGirl on May 2, 2009 at 1:39am
I want to find that sort of love :)

xo
Comment by g on May 1, 2009 at 10:36pm
excellent, woke up some memories, so it's very effective.
Comment by Ty Bluesmith on April 29, 2009 at 9:47pm
i love her for that fo sho
Comment by essygie on April 29, 2009 at 8:53pm
lovely, especially that middle paragraph :-)
Comment by Trevor Mcpherson on April 29, 2009 at 5:34pm
That was a perfect last line. A strong start and a strong finish can really frame story well...looks like you already figured that out!
Comment by Michael Solender on April 29, 2009 at 3:30pm
last line is the answer - he is doing internal belly flops too!! you know he is..

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