What can YOU say in six sentences?
Jack-O and Kin continue their convo
“Buddy, she got me lit in 2 seconds flat, higher than a kite! I’m hotter than a slutty nurse on Halloween!”
“Tell me about it! She sure knows how to get the fires burnin’ within, doesn’t she? I can’t help it, the longer I sit here the more she makes me glow on the inside and out.”
“Oh Buddy, those old flames are brutal...”
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Comment by Angela on October 10, 2012 at 7:09pm Your dialogue is quick and authentic. Nice six.
lol, stephen! wait till you read the next one. fits perfectly! :)
Comment by Stephen Torelli on October 9, 2012 at 6:13pm Bolton, I just want to let you know that the pumpkin harvest is thriving in New York this year. Not sure if it has anything to do with our beautiful nurses... just sayin!
Comment by Diana E. Backhouse on October 9, 2012 at 2:32pm You made me chuckle, Bolton. Thanks so much for your sense of humour.
jamie - i think every man's head turns at slutty nurse. :)
gita - as long as it's white, short, low cut, and semi-see through with one of those hats, it passes!
Comment by Gita on October 9, 2012 at 12:53pm Is there a specific slutty nurse costume? Where can I get one?
Comment by Jamie Hogan on October 9, 2012 at 10:36am All of these make me smile. And you can always whip my head around with the phrase "slutty nurse."
oh, stephen, no publishing. haven't even thought about it. not opposed to it, but at this point, just hoping people can follow my crazy mind. :)
Comment by Stephen Torelli on October 8, 2012 at 10:12pm Racy discussion... how could they? Excellent writing. Are you getting these vignettes published?
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