The Talking Pumpkinhead Chronicles - Jack-O lights up

Jack-O and Kin continue their convo

 

“Buddy, she got me lit in 2 seconds flat, higher than a kite!   I’m hotter than a slutty nurse on Halloween!”

“Tell me about it!  She sure knows how to get the fires burnin’ within, doesn’t she?  I can’t help it, the longer I sit here the more she makes me glow on the inside and out.”

“Oh Buddy, those old flames are brutal...”

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Tags: dialogue, dorkiness, jack-o-lantern-flames, pumpkins, wordplay

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Comment by Angela on October 10, 2012 at 7:09pm

Your dialogue is quick and authentic.  Nice six.

Comment by bolton carley on October 9, 2012 at 7:21pm

lol, stephen!  wait till you read the next one. fits perfectly! :)

Comment by Stephen Torelli on October 9, 2012 at 6:13pm

Bolton, I just want to let you know that the pumpkin harvest is thriving in New York this year. Not sure if it has anything to do with our beautiful nurses... just sayin!

Comment by Diana E. Backhouse on October 9, 2012 at 2:32pm

You made me chuckle, Bolton. Thanks so much for your sense of humour.

Comment by bolton carley on October 9, 2012 at 2:05pm

jamie - i think every man's head turns at slutty nurse. :)  

gita - as long as it's white, short, low cut, and semi-see through with one of those hats, it passes!

Comment by Gita on October 9, 2012 at 12:53pm

Is there a specific slutty nurse costume? Where can I get one?

Comment by Jamie Hogan on October 9, 2012 at 10:36am

All of these make me smile. And you can always whip my head around with the phrase "slutty nurse."

Comment by bolton carley on October 8, 2012 at 10:39pm

oh, stephen, no publishing.  haven't even thought about it. not opposed to it, but at this point,  just hoping people can follow my crazy mind. :)

Comment by Stephen Torelli on October 8, 2012 at 10:12pm

Racy discussion... how could they?  Excellent writing. Are you getting these vignettes published?

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