What can YOU say in six sentences?
The Take, Part Four
Noting the guards, what time they come on duty and their rounds.
Checking camera positions and figuring how to avoid exposure.
Watching the tellers, how they move around the floor, their demeanors: will this one panic, will that one stay cool, can we expect trouble?
Keeping tabs on the Loomis trucks that come and go during any given week: are the guards the same, where do they take the money once inside, where's the vault?
Busy hours, slow hours, optimum time to knock the place on its ass.
There's a lot of shit you have to plan for when you're going to rob a bank; fortunately, we have six guys on the job.
Checking camera positions and figuring how to avoid exposure.
Watching the tellers, how they move around the floor, their demeanors: will this one panic, will that one stay cool, can we expect trouble?
Keeping tabs on the Loomis trucks that come and go during any given week: are the guards the same, where do they take the money once inside, where's the vault?
Busy hours, slow hours, optimum time to knock the place on its ass.
There's a lot of shit you have to plan for when you're going to rob a bank; fortunately, we have six guys on the job.
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Comment by Christopher Grant on October 12, 2009 at 5:05pm -
Thanks, Paul, it's only going to get better, I think. The fun I'm having with this story, which seems to be coming off the top of my head as I sit down. There's more to come.
CJT, this is basically what I write, crime-related fiction. I hang out with crime fiction writers, I read what they write and publish it on my crime/noir fiction site and I read what they write for other crime/noir fiction sites. If you want something else, I might not be the right guy to go to.
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Comment by Paul D Brazill on October 12, 2009 at 12:17pm -
Great stuff christopher.
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