The Pitch

"Hi, yeah, it's me -- I have a great idea for a short story and wanted to see what you think about it. You see, this guys works with a psychotherapist and finds a warp hole into his past. Through this sixth dimensional portal he is reunited with all the unresolved relationships of his entire life and gets a chance for closure, sort of like a high tech Ebeneezer Scrooge. "

"No, it's not science fiction."

"The portal? Oh, it's Facebook."

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Comment by MartiW on August 4, 2009 at 10:26pm
Mahalo, all. Erin, the dilemma you've described is my current $64K question. Part two, perhaps.
Comment by Erin Cole on July 27, 2009 at 1:48pm
Marti, you know what works! and you're so damn crafty.

Funny thing though is that I don't know if the portal would provide closure or more opportunity to make the same mistakes!! know what I mean. I could go on and on about my sisters and their old boyfriends they chat with!!
Comment by Michael Solender on July 27, 2009 at 6:45am
yowza..right on there - i try to fly there under the radar..
Comment by JMac on July 27, 2009 at 12:05am
LOL. Very nice, girl.
Comment by mal on July 26, 2009 at 8:08pm
Yes, is that the truth,....
Comment by MartiW on July 26, 2009 at 3:05am
It's eerily true, tho!
Comment by Margaret Swanson on July 26, 2009 at 2:31am
I like this! Funny! The use of "portal" sets the reader up to be drawn down an"other world" avenue, only to find themselves a few clicks of their own fingers away from the experience.

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