The Guest Book - 11

[Pamila Payne]

Clark Mannish was pacing around in the lobby bellowing, "Hello? Anybody here?" when Romeo stepped out of the hallway to greet him, mere moments after he had banged on the desk bell. The guy was a mess, as guys always are after untold days on the road in varying states of shamed anxiety, or angry resentment, or depressed resolve, or some combination of all that and more for having been exiled from New York City. Romeo wasn't yet privy to what Mannish had done to earn himself a stint at the Bella Vista, but sooner or later, as he always did, he'd find out. Mannish was god damned enormous and that annoyed Romeo right off the bat. Romeo was a respectable six feet tall with a fine muscular build, but this guy stood a whole head taller than him and though not exactly fat, somehow seemed to overfill the space he occupied in a way that made you want to step back and give him more room. Mannish scratched his fingers through beard stubble that would have made a scrub brush look soft, and continued up the side of his head to rake his disheveled mop of black hair as he said without pause, "Oh, glad somebody's on the night shift here, you got a room ready for me, sure you do, Mr. G said I'd be expected, listen, I'm starving, have a couple of sandwiches sent to my room and I'll need my suitcases out of the car right away... say, aren't you Romeo... sure you are, I remember you used to be something of a big shot a while back," he giggled in that way that set Romeo's teeth on edge, "how do you like that, well, we're all in the same boat now."


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And thanks for reading

[JMac]

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[JMac]

I have a feeling things aren't going to turn to hot for mannish. Get'em Romeo!

[Pamila Payne]

Thanks everyone. My devoted readers have been following along since the beginning, but if you're wondering what it's all about, please visit my blog here on 6S or http://pamilapayne.blogspot.com.

[Harry]

Row row row that boat Pamila! Those of you who have not caught the Bella Vista from the beginning would be doing yourselves a favor to go to the link above. Qutstanding as always Pamila! $$$

[Paul D Brazill]

Brilliant.

[Walter Conley]

"...this guy stood a whole head taller than him and though not exactly fat, somehow seemed to overfill the space he occupied in a way that made you want to step back and give him more room."

Pamila, you can turn a @#$%^&! phrase.

[Laurita]

I love these trips to the Bella Vista. Chillingly good.

[Allie]

Hi, I was trying to get some noir writing stirred up here. I put out a noir challenge about a week ago. Glad to see someone doing it.