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The Ending
He woke to see her leaning against the upholstered headboard, staring down into his face; from his vantage point it was like being in the valley of the boobs -- not an unpleasant place. He clawed his way up from the Espionage Dream where he’d been running across a rain blasted, cobbled street in some German city pre-World War II. “We should be married,” she said. Dream webs and the stun of reality threatened to strike him dumb. “I…I need to go to the bathroom.” “I knew you’d get upset,” she whispered loud enough for him to hear before he slammed the bathroom door and muttered “Crap!” He did what he had to do, washed his hands, opened the door: “OK. Let’s do it.”
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Comment by Trevor Mcpherson on March 31, 2009 at 7:32pm -
I get this one.
Mine often asks me questions of monumental importance or complexity as soon as she thinks I might be awake. You nailed the male reaction very well.
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Comment by Jay Holmes on March 31, 2009 at 5:26pm -
It would be pretty cool to wake up in the valley of boobs.
-Jay
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Comment by Ellen Reilly McCormick on March 31, 2009 at 4:44pm -
Did you laugh? Or, maybe smile?
I'm taking fiction writing exercises I've done recently and turning them into 6s. It's a challenge.
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Comment by Michael Solender on March 31, 2009 at 4:37pm -
what a romantic he is.. nice 6 here.
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