Strange Fear

[Ali Znaidi]

What made her fear the rain ))) a strange emotion ((( was the rain’s motion. Today the rain fell but it didn’t reach the ground!!! The smothered rain scared her, but who cares? The ex[tension] of this feeling was something like a torrential rain that has nothing to do but scar her already wounded heart. Listening to the stifled voice of the rain, she looked like an innocent little child scared by a scare[crow]. The rain stopped, but fear & anxiety were still tilling her chest.

[Ali Znaidi]

Thank you very much for your comments Joey & Angela.

[Joey Delgado]

This a nice piece. Feels somewhat apocalyptic? Was this a new year's six?

I liked the "Listening to the stifled voice of the rain, she looked like an innocent little child scared by a scare[crow].

[Angela]

I liked the phrase "tilling her chest".