What can YOU say in six sentences?
What made her fear the rain ))) a strange emotion ((( was the rain’s motion. Today the rain fell but it didn’t reach the ground!!! The smothered rain scared her, but who cares? The ex[tension] of this feeling was something like a torrential rain that has nothing to do but scar her already wounded heart. Listening to the stifled voice of the rain, she looked like an innocent little child scared by a scare[crow]. The rain stopped, but fear & anxiety were still tilling her chest.