Sounds Like a Fairy Tale, But Only For Grown-Ups

[Angela]

Nightly, he told her to stand, walk, turn, and bend, and she did it flawlessly.  Then, he had her kneel on the floor next to his chair until he was ready for her to sit in his lap, and when he gestured for her to place herself there and he settled himself under her, he asked her questions to which she knew all the answers.  He called her a good girl then, for she was a good girl in all her tasks, and he loved to watch her smile, with her demure eyes downward, at knowing he was pleased.  Bear in mind that she never had to lift a finger she did not first want to lift, but as if by magic, she always wanted what he wanted, and in that way everything worked out perfectly.  He taught her how to be different people - innocent little Sarah, mature and worldly Andrea, Shannon with her diverse preferences, and of course herself – to whom she had been a stranger before knowing him.  Remarkably changing from one role to another, she shone before his eyes, and she never used his name; he adored her, and grew sick at the thought of ever being without her, and bought expensive, unusual gifts for her, and they thrived in deeply guarded privacy.

[Edward Dean]

Whewwww.................This certainly was a walk on the wild side.Great fantasy write Grey.

I didn't know they made this model anymore.

Can I get one online?????:)

[Bill Floyd]

Role playing as character fulfillment?  I dig it.  And she obviously does, too.  How do fairy tales end?

[Travis Smith]

Intriguing and almost disturbing (in a good way).  Great job capturing the different aspects of that

[Gita]

This is carefully thought out and worded, almost like an instructional pamphlet for S&M, which I mean as a compliment to the writer for the precision of such phrases as "stand, walk, turn, and bend," and " He taught her how to be different people - innocent little Sarah, mature and worldly Andrea."  I  felt a slight warning bell at "grew sick at the thought of ever being without her" because therein lies the seed of addiction. Altogether a really well written tale.

[Brittany]

when it works, it works. beautifully done.

[Robert Crisman]

Yes, a fairy tale...

[Mike Handley]

Sister Grimm: I like this soooo much better than "happily ever after."