What can YOU say in six sentences?
Ten o’clock Friday morning, two women in housecoats were smoking in dinette chairs on a porch no bigger than a sheet of plywood. Two shotgun houses away, three men worked on a late model Ford, hood raised, its right front wheel on blocks.
One of the shadetree mechanics kept hitching up his pants, which required that he bite the tip of his cigarette to free his hands. He was bare-chested, a twentysomething David – only bronze, not marble – and one of the women fixed him with a hungry stare.
Around a few corners, but on the same side of the tracks, smoke curled upward from a takeout rib shack’s grill on wheels. The establishment was Goodwill-bin small, barely big enough for the cook, whose blaxploitation sideburns were 50 years out of date.
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Six-thirty that evening, at the other end of Greenwood, one of the finest R&B (heavy on the B) bands I’ve ever heard was making the catfish dance in the nearby Yazoo River. After each song, five people clapped – mine the loudest.
Incredibly, fewer than 100 people, most of them white, were within sight of the stage for this free concert. Two couples and a few children danced, and then the band broke into Albert King’s “I’ll Play the Blues for You.”
That pulsating classic lured a ribsman from his kiosk to the forefront, and he was all-by-himself poetry in motion … SMOKIN … causing men to look at their shoes, women to bob in their seats and one little girl to wander onto the street and imitate his moves.
If his homemade barbecue sauce was half as spicy as his thrusts, even teetotalers would’ve stampeded the beer tent.
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Comment by Brittany on May 19, 2012 at 5:48am this is like the crunchy bits of barbecue sauce on those ribs. :) so delicious!! it brought me back here. http://vimeo.com/32543029
Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on May 10, 2012 at 6:05pm I could hear the music see the catfish, smell the sauce and wanted to stay a while. Fav.
Comment by Bill Floyd on May 9, 2012 at 9:29am Smoking as music as sex as the blues. The cadence and vibe go well with the imagery. Have to clear my throat after this one.
Comment by Robert Crisman on May 8, 2012 at 11:18pm Smokin' indeed, and thank god for little girls...
Comment by Angela on May 8, 2012 at 9:40pm That is a fine moving word picture, Sir.
You are on FI-YAH! This is where your heart is. Faved.
Great atmosphere! I am there and dancing with them all.
Comment by Ron. Lavalette on May 8, 2012 at 3:05pm That grill ain't the only thing smokin, my friend. Third degree fingertips & a melting keyboard...
Great stuff, dude. Gotta love them dancin ddatfish. Salute!
Comment by Stephen Torelli on May 8, 2012 at 2:03pm Oh smokin' indeed. And very picturesque! You took me there, Mike. Very well done.
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