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Silent Waters
She was standing right there, near the big tree, in front of the vast ocean. A tear trickled down her cheek.
She walked into the ocean. She walked and walked and kept on walking till she could finally sense her own breath freezing. She smiled for one last time and burst her lungs out by saying that she loved him and that she hated her life. And then she closed her eyes after taking the final step.
The waves swept over her hair and her eyelids started turning blue.She was pushed and pulled by the tides right into the ocean.
The sun rose.Her eyes opened. There she was. Again in the life she hated but in the arms of the man whom she loved.
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5 Comments
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Comment by alisa rynay haller on October 27, 2009 at 2:25pm - wow that packed a powerful punch!
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Comment by Smriti on July 12, 2009 at 11:17am - yeah, i love this part onli
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Comment by Nora Ibsen on July 11, 2009 at 1:02pm - At least in the arms of the man she loved.
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Comment by Smriti on July 10, 2009 at 1:33pm
- Thanks a ton. :)
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Comment by Jodi MacArthur on July 9, 2009 at 10:50pm - This is pretty cool. Great metaphor.
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