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What can YOU say in six sentences?
Shreveport Bank Job Mojo
No combo, but I’m gettin’ it. Sure, it’s goin’ a little slow, but I got ‘the touch’: works every time. Just feel my way toward that sweet, sweet cash. When everythin’ clicks, these tumblers make the most beautiful music-- smooth as a good night’s sleep.
Outside, in the car, Bobbi Jean’s my getaway. That little liar says she loves my touch--- says she’ll love me longer than any little ol’ life sentence.
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Comment by Michelle on July 22, 2012 at 12:50am -
Fantastic. Paints a clean, clear, interesting picture.
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Comment by Brittany on July 21, 2012 at 10:19pm -
what a great last line, Brad!
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Comment by Joey Delgado on July 21, 2012 at 1:13pm -
Nicely done, Brad. The six has a great rhythm, like Jim Thompson with a sense of humor. Really great..
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Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on July 21, 2012 at 9:27am -
HAHA. Great 6
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Comment by Paul de Denus on July 20, 2012 at 11:39pm -
Great fan of brevity and you're a master of it Brad- love'd the last line.
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Comment by Brad Rose on July 20, 2012 at 2:57pm -
Thanks Sandra. I'm aiming for shorter and ever shorter. Maybe eventually get to six-WORD sentence.
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Comment by Sandra Davies on July 20, 2012 at 11:40am -
You've done it again. Again.
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