Seven

My dream has a name, and a mind, and a heart all its own. No matter how distant it seems, I feel it in my deepest corners; peeling back the edges of my heart and making them flutter. A shadow aches over every moment that comes and goes with my dream (still a dream). Somewhere in between the comings and goings, sometimes, I get a little taste. It goes down rough and sweet like a wine that's aged too long. I've waited, long and patient, to be realized by a dream.

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Comment by AlluraG on April 17, 2009 at 11:39am
oh my, I like this a lot. Very powerful; yet soft and heartbreaking as well. The imagery is fabulous! A start to finish winner.
Comment by Naomi on March 28, 2009 at 3:13pm
Thank you, all.
Comment by Irene Sieders on March 24, 2009 at 11:37am
Lovely, very tender and fragile.
Comment by Ty Bluesmith on March 24, 2009 at 10:21am
That's very nice.
Comment by Laurita on March 24, 2009 at 8:51am
A shadow aches over every moment that comes and goes with my dream (still a dream).

Great line.
Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on March 23, 2009 at 8:14pm
Very good. Welcome.
Comment by Lorianne on March 23, 2009 at 7:14pm
peeling back the edges of my heart and making them flutter such wonderful images in this...well done.

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