Repeat Offender

I took my time, ten years and not one complaint. When I got out, I went down to Club Arseni, hooked up with Remma again. We fucked until I was all wrung out but I took my time. When that Romanian prick Vladamir showed, I jumped him hard on the payback. Prison makes you sharp, patient. I took my time.

 

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Comment by Gita on January 26, 2013 at 12:58pm

YOWZA this is good.  Not just good writing on your part but good editing.

Fave.

Comment by Bill Floyd on January 26, 2013 at 12:03pm

Did you already have this in mind when you wrote the Club Arseni piece?  Or did writing about that sleazebag Vladimir whet your imagination and demand justice?  Either way, hell of a coupling.   

Comment by Joey Delgado on January 26, 2013 at 1:56am

Nice. Definitely a dish best served cold. 

So much story packed into those short sentences. Great work.

Comment by Angela on January 25, 2013 at 8:56pm

How can you tell such a great story in such a short space and use a phrase three times?  Fine six.

Comment by Bill Lapham on January 25, 2013 at 7:40pm
Packed and powerful.
Comment by Other on January 25, 2013 at 6:33pm

Intent is bad, hones in.  Nicely constructed.

Comment by Sandra Davies on January 25, 2013 at 3:18pm

Sly and insidious.

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