What can YOU say in six sentences?
"The reason I married him," she said, "is because he lets me wear my red petticoat."
She didn't even say it to me; I heard it from someone else, but I know her penchant for wearing red petticoats and other bizarre outfits, so I smiled.
And I kept the memory with me... even as I longed for someone in my life who would "let me wear my red petticoat."
Finally, tired of shape-shifting, I made vows to me and set out anew.
As I met each new person along the road, I put feathers in my hair, picked the olives out of the salad, chased pink horned toads, talked in my sleep, packed my suitcase a week advance, sat cross-legged in the seat of the pickup, asked too many questions.
I wore my red petticoats and they peaked out from beneath my skin.
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Comment by Mike Handley on July 10, 2012 at 11:38am Superb. We are who we are, warts (or the much better "petticoats") and all, unique as the stripes on watermelons.
Comment by Cita on July 8, 2012 at 6:39pm YEAH for the comments! Thank you for getting it, thank you for reading, and thank you for sharing some of your red petticoats. Joey, you and I would get along just fine. I like A1 on just about anything.
If you can't find someone who loves your red petticoat, it's better to be alone. If you do find someone, celebrate the find. But the best is if you both have different petticoats and you love each other's.
Comment by Joey Delgado on July 7, 2012 at 10:50pm Great six! My red petticoat equivalents, a slightly unhealthy Stevie Nicks obsession and A1 sauce on my Kraft Mac & Cheese. Deal with it. #4 is my favorite. :) Well done.
Comment by Angela on July 7, 2012 at 9:31pm What a fantastic 6th.
I think someone hid mine.
Red petticoats rule. I put mine up high in a dark closet about a decade ago. I've been wearing them again. It's funny how much better they fit. Great six.
Comment by Bill Floyd on July 7, 2012 at 12:28pm OK, this is a return to form for you. Top notch. We all want someone to love us for our quirks, because they're what makes us unique. Sentence 5 really sings--keep asking too many questions.
Comment by Cita on July 7, 2012 at 11:08am Gita, we all want to be loved in spite of or particularly FOR our red petticoats. And I think gender has nothing to do with it.
Comment by Simon Halliday on July 7, 2012 at 12:35am I like this because it seems well written and it leaves behind a trail of question marks. But I have no idea what it means. What is the context ? Or is this magical realism and just is ?
Comment by Gita on July 6, 2012 at 10:29pm I want a love who thinks my wild and curly hair is beautiful. But, ya know, people in hell want water!
I love your six. Do you think every woman has a secret red petticoat equivalent?
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