Her lumpy bed hurt her skin.

She told them I feel something,

they sighed, Geez, you’re such a princess,

get over it.  Still, something

made deep bruises,

kept her wakeful,

left blue half-moons under her eyes.

 

One day, making her bed, she found,

not peas beneath the mattress, but

cracker crumbs     tacks     her sister’s jacks,

scattered in the sheets, on her pillow.

What is that in your bed? they said,

how do you suppose it got in there?

 

When I move out, she thought, maybe next week,

maybe tonight when they’ve fallen asleep,

I’m buying new sheets.

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Comment by bolton carley on October 22, 2012 at 2:17pm

love the touches of fairy tales thrown in!

Comment by Diana E. Backhouse on October 22, 2012 at 1:42pm

We've probably all been reading too much Hogan and Floyd. Goodness knows what it is doing to our collective psyche.

Comment by Gita on October 22, 2012 at 9:54am

Interesting.  She may be naive about buying sheets at night after "they" have fallen asleep, though.

I was expecting a more dire ending. It felt like this was building to something possibly vengeful.  Maybe I've been reading too much Hogan and Floyd on here.

 

 

Comment by Diana E. Backhouse on October 22, 2012 at 4:36am

This sounds so real as if from your own experience at some point. Is that so?

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