What can YOU say in six sentences?
Xavier Tito’s eleventh-hour reprieve was rejected by the Republican Governor, whose re-election and political future, the news said, depended on the Governor’s continued “get-tough-on-crime” policies to win over the remaining fraction of undecided suburban voters who held an abiding abhorrence of inner city crime.
A few minutes before dawn at Beaumont Federal Penitentiary, the guards unlocked Xavier Tito’s cell, handcuffed the three-time felon’s hands directly in front of him—so that it would appear to the gathered witnesses as if he’d been praying---then led the unrepentant prisoner to the execution chamber, where he was immediately strapped to the waiting green gurney. Two men from the injection team stepped forward to connect Xavier Tito to the electrocardiogram (EKG), so that the beeping machine could monitor the prisoner’s final heart beats. The sheets emanated a familiar, creosote-like scent of the industrial detergent they’d been freshly laundered in, the night before, in the prison laundry.
The prison’s head nurse—a woman far prettier than one might expect to find in this line of work— floated to Xavier’s side, and efficiently swabbed with alcohol the tattooed site of the death-beckoning injection of pancuronium bromide. She did so, just as the prison’s medical protocol instructed—“to prevent any possibility of infection.”
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Comment by Gita on October 29, 2012 at 2:44pm yeah, I always thought that was a helluvan irony. I want to say that I first heard about that in a Carl Hiassen novel... he does absurdity well. I like your floating prison nurse.
pancuronium bromide is what they use as part of anesthesia before surgery , its a muscle relaxant. oh, good to know that.
Comment by Angela on October 28, 2012 at 7:31pm Yep. I've often wondered whether or not they bother with the alcohol or not. Good six.
Comment by Bill Lapham on October 28, 2012 at 12:35pm "Pancuronium bromide" sounds like something that could run a nuclear reactor; therefore, it ought to be effective against humans.
Comment by Brad Rose on October 28, 2012 at 10:57am Thanks Mike. Great mind,s they say, think alike. :>)
Comment by Mike Handley on October 28, 2012 at 10:49am Good job, Brad. I love it when a writer gives voice to thoughts I've thunk.
ahhh the irony. Perfect buildup.
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