What can YOU say in six sentences?
A fire was burning near the stop sign. "Call 911!" said Mrs. Black. "Wait, it's fine," said Mr. Gray. "It's under control." It was early evening, not quite dark. They watched the flames, one contentedly, one on edge.
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Comment by Angela on December 2, 2011 at 9:12pm Hmm. More story here, I think, and I like to imagine what it is.
I like this. Is it supposed to contrast men and women? (I hope not.)
Comment by Robert McEvily on December 2, 2011 at 11:55am Nice one, John. (Stay tuned for 2012!)
Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on December 2, 2011 at 11:41am HAHA @ John.
Comment by John Ammirati on December 2, 2011 at 8:08am You should submit this to http://sixsentences.blogspot.com/, I think Rob would dig it.
Comment by Robert Crisman on December 1, 2011 at 6:30pm Perspective is shaped by interest, and reading this piece, I got the sense, perhaps misplaced, that Mr. Gray might even have set the fire. At any rate, the piece leaves you to ponder. You know, you oughtta do more of this stuff. Nice to see you back around.
Comment by Bill Floyd on December 1, 2011 at 2:58pm A swimming return.
Comment by Ron. Lavalette on December 1, 2011 at 5:41am It's not a fire. Or, if it is, it's nothing to worry about.
A really fine 6.
Sometimes I'm Mrs. Black. Sometimes I'm Mr. Gray. Most often I'm Miss White and miss the fire while studying the gathering crowd and smoke. Nice one.
Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on November 30, 2011 at 8:26pm HAHA I see you haven't lost your touch. 6 Master.
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