Part 25

[Adrian George Nicolae]

Thirty minutes have passed and no sign of the mother, and he kept getting restless because there were no ins or outs in the boy's room.

He became cramped in the chair and decided to stretch out his limbs outside.

Two steps away from leaving the hospital when he saw a woman running toward him, a woman of approximate 35-40 years, dressed rather fancy for this occasion, wearing a business suit and a heel shoes; he was surprised she could run with those on.

Greg decided to approach her on the steps and asked if her son was named Paul; she nodded.

In the spur of the moment, he grabbed her by the hand and hurried inside the hospital, inside the room.

The two nurses stopped what they were doing when the door was opened and glanced at the two, who were holding hands -with faint traces of sweat whooshing down their faces- and she was breathing a bit sluggish, but the two nurses smiled and the one that took the boy to the bathroom left the room, to get the doctor. 

[Angela]

I agree with the pacing, as Joey said.

[Diana E. Backhouse]

Paul's mother can run! In high heels too!!

[Joey Delgado]

Can't wait to see mom's reaction. You pace these nicely. A nice steady jog.