October’s 13/#4 - Frankly-Doctor-You-Make-Me-Crazy

i-not-think-good-for-nice-words. body-sore-from-needle-holes-and-slice-parts. doctor-say-I-truly-alive. me-grateful-for-all-parts-him-give. only-hate-blue-jolt-him-repeat-send-through-my-being-while-him-laugh-crazy-to-sky. jolt-work-first-time-and-now-annoy-with-fry-brain-and-once-him-finish-with-new-hand-sew-i-help-remove-laugh-from-crazy-him-face.

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Comment by Angela on October 8, 2012 at 1:42pm

Laughed out loud.  First time in a while.  Thank you.

Comment by Joey Delgado on October 5, 2012 at 5:24pm
Asylum lit. Truly scary stuff. Chilled me. Great stuff!
Comment by Diana E. Backhouse on October 4, 2012 at 2:19pm

I think you should put this to music, Paul. I enjoyed Gita's response.

Comment by Gita on October 4, 2012 at 12:54pm

all-words-here-good-make-me-laugh-to-sky-then-I be sorry-about-needle-holes.

I like-you-text-me-when-you-get-thumbs.

Comment by bolton carley on October 4, 2012 at 10:39am

i feel like a frankenstein piece is coming on.  love your ability to write voice/commentary.  

Comment by Jamie Hogan on October 4, 2012 at 9:29am

crazy-him-face made me chuckle, for some reason. Then I thought about what's in store for the doctor and it wasn't so funny anymore.

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