What can YOU say in six sentences?
And so, the pen moves across the page and we find relief...
From what, exactly? Poorish food and the dull slog of time, from tedium and gray sheets, numbers that never quite add up and the incessant humm?
And so, the pen moves across the page, a kind of salvation--not the kind of being saved where one lies back sodden in the boat, breathing hard and dripping--but a kind of reaching toward that which saves, an active chewing of the wafer and gulping of the wine, rituals that just might keep us afloat if we do it often enough, kick hard enough, or clap our hands loud enough while saying, "Truly, I don't want to drown."
So we make up words (one a week because there are never enough words) and we try again to describe the sunset or the frog or the ache under our skins that can only be alleviated by the describing.
And so the pen moves across the page and the ink soothes and saves like rain in the desert, puddling and splashing and renewing our focus so that we live again.
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Comment by Mike Handley on July 10, 2012 at 11:34am Sentence No. 5. Oh, yes. Number 5.
Comment by Cita on July 8, 2012 at 6:41pm Gita, it was Jamie. I thought that whole round-table discussion was profound. It informed the way I feel about all of you and about HoW. Sob.
Speaking from a spate of time when I have not been writing, I have to say that this poured out from my NEED. The pressure had, indeed, built.
Comment by Gita on July 8, 2012 at 1:33am You speak to a basic truth -- the NEED to write daily -- that we all share under this roof. Was it Jamie who said at HoW, "I can't NOT write?" I forget. But that's essentially what I get from this piece. It's like a pressure that builds up inside.
Excellent.
Comment by Bill Floyd on July 7, 2012 at 12:23pm "Mixology," makes me think of bartenders or remixers, people who bring relief or refreshment or a new take on old ideas. Mix away.
I never noticed the metaphors were mixed because I was too busy feeling saved and relieved. Doesn't nature mix it up? Adore this. Faved.
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