Love Story

[Joey Delgado]

The kisses come just as easily as the conversation, whether fueled by coffee, wine, or just plain old desire.

 

One's view that criticism is necessary for growth and the other's belief that compliments are key, keeps the scales balanced.

 

Discovery of quirks becomes a treasure hunt and not additions to the 'Con' side of the list.

 

Holding hands on the couch is exciting as holding hands on the stage of an outdoor amphitheatre under starlight.

 

Writing an overly-sentimental treatise on love no longer seems like fake posturing, but as real and genuine as your laugh when I say something ridiculous.

 

Once upon a time, indeed... 

[Joey Delgado]

Thank you, Geni! :)

[Geni Stratton]

Well written...nice balance.

 

 

[Joey Delgado]

Thanks, Mike. :)

[Mike Handley]

Very nice, Joey.

[Scarlett Rose]

:)

[Joey Delgado]

Dang it, Scarlett! I swear I'm not that bad of a speller. Promise. Changing it now.

[Scarlett Rose]

Unexpected last line, but good stuff! Love Cita's comment down below, sums it up nicely. Also (I AM SERIOUSLY A JERK) compliments or complements? xo.

[Joey Delgado]

Thank you, guys!! :)

[bolton carley]

great tie-in at the end.  perspective is everything in love and war.

[Jamie Hogan]

Last line is a gut punch, but great. Also really liked the discovering of quirks as a treasure hunt. This piece has a lot of heart, bud. Top shelf.