Love and Other Chemical Reactions.

It's a good year, for a narcoleptic love story.

It's a good year, for invading sacred territory.

So won't you come and be with me?

So won't you come and be with me?

I've got your swan song, skipping on the turntable and some refills on aphrodisiacs.

We'll sleep through transluscent days and watch the glow in the dark sky I've taped to my ceiling.

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Comment by Wendy on July 23, 2010 at 12:06pm
This is good chemistry all around!
Comment by Angela on July 23, 2010 at 10:28am
Enjoying your journal very much. The last line makes me think horizontally.
Comment by Joe Gensle on July 23, 2010 at 7:26am
I think sentence five is your high voltage power line, here - as I used to say (prior to the band's naming), 'Tragically hip and chronically cool." Excellent in both artistic realms.
Comment by Jenny on July 23, 2010 at 12:52am
palpable yearning. very human.
Comment by Sandra Davies on July 23, 2010 at 12:50am
As soon as I read your first line I had that song 'Be mine' by Robyn in my head -- similar rhythm and , to me, the right sort of voice, but 'We'll sleep through transluscent days' changed things entirely ... nice
Comment by Teresa on July 22, 2010 at 11:20pm
I can hear the old scratchy sounds of forgotten music, especially in the repetition of, "...So won't you come and be with me?" Captivating.
Comment by Gita on July 22, 2010 at 11:06pm
who could refuse such an invitation?
Comment by Monica Manning on July 22, 2010 at 10:50pm
The title wraps it all up. I can feel the sadness beneath it all. Great 6.
Comment by Robert Crisman on July 22, 2010 at 10:45pm
Love sleeps a sinister sleep.

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