What can YOU say in six sentences?
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I’ll tell you right now. People are just people. Everything I unloaded on her hurt. Everything she responded with was understandable. That included the gunfire. That’s all.
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Comment by Toby Tucker Hecht on March 3, 2012 at 2:30pm
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Very good! I love these short-short-shorts.
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Comment by Deborah Jovan Reed on March 2, 2012 at 9:58pm -
i agree with angela. both you and jeanette have a gift i'm reaching out for... to be succinct.
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Comment by Angela on March 2, 2012 at 9:53am -
I really appreciate your ability to say it all using so little, and your ability to say it all using a lot. You are a talented writer, Paul. I always look forward to your posts, and this is certainly no exception.
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Comment by Bill Floyd on March 2, 2012 at 9:51am -
Awesome.
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Comment by Gita Smith on March 2, 2012 at 9:47am -
God bless the short declarative sentence! Yes! You worked it.
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Comment by Paul de Denus on March 2, 2012 at 9:14am -
Thanks Mike & Teresa-
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Comment by Mike Handley on March 1, 2012 at 10:57pm -
That's enough. Well done.
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Comment by Teresa on March 1, 2012 at 10:14pm
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My comment was twenty-seven words. Osmosis.
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You get the prize (next to Brad) for the most story with the fewest words. Twenty-seven words. Twenty-eight without the contraction. I am entirely incapable of this.
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