I Remember ......

[claire voyent]

I remember when my brother and I were so close people thought we were twins.

I remember when he was my hero.

I remember how honored I was when he named his daughter after me.

I remember crying together when our mother was diagnosed with cancer.

I remember how he changed when the will was read and he felt he deserved more.

I remember the last time we saw each other 13 years ago and how I cried as he drove off.  

[claire voyent]

Thank you all for your kind comments!  Sadly this is a true story and to this day we still are not speaking.

[Teresa]

Powerful.

[Angela]

This was so beautifully simple and direct.  The progression is smooth, too.  Well done.