What can YOU say in six sentences?
I do a lot of waiting,
and listening.
I do a lot of silent staring,
and I do a lot of daydreaming.
I do a lot of problem solving,
some on my own book,
some on his.
I do a lot of list making,
crossing out,
and drinking after six.
I do a lot of dreaming about water,
about cock,
about getting on the right bus,
about sorting through what is
worthwhile and what is not.
I do a lot of waiting,
and there is no way,
now,
to fence me in.
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What Bill said and your scratched off list is impressive. Beautiful work.
Comment by Angela on August 23, 2011 at 8:01pm
Comment by Bill Floyd on August 23, 2011 at 6:21pm
Comment by Gita on August 23, 2011 at 12:37pm The next time you are sitting and waiting, you might do what I do: play movie star-related Six Degrees of Separation.For example, how would you get from Lyle Lovett to Ed Asner (Lou Grant)?
How would you get from John Cleese to Jennifer Aniston?
Your poem is wonderful. I loved
I do a lot of dreaming about water,
about cock,
about getting on the right bus,
about sorting through what is
worthwhile and what is not.
Comment by Travis Smith on August 23, 2011 at 12:07pm
Comment by Gloria on August 23, 2011 at 11:52am
Comment by Cita on August 23, 2011 at 10:14am Thank you. I am re-reading this in the early morning. It is already hot. I've already crossed things off the list:
feed horses
set gates
water garden
water boss's garden
water boss's houseplants
turn on water at barn
drink two cups of coffee out of doors while I waaaaaaaandeeerrrrrrr
Comment by Robert Crisman on August 23, 2011 at 12:00am
Comment by Mike Handley on August 22, 2011 at 11:41pm
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