His Needs

[Stephanie]

He told her he wanted to see her ; that he needed her near.

She spoke in monotone not really affected by his plea of
neediness.

Like a robot she coddled him and told him that things would be ok.

A smile escaped his sorrowful face as he laid there in her arms.

"I love you." rolled off his tongue and through her ears, but she did not
hear a sound.

Too busy thinking of ways to end this endless cycle of unbalanced
emotional bank robbery.

[mal]

Gosh, what a loverly flowing story. Great read /thanks...

[Ms Q]

This sounds like me, Stephanie! Neediness is not an attractive trait, I think you captured this well.

[Stephanie]

Thanks Jeanette and Strangegirl for the feedback!!!

[strangegirl]

I unfortunately know this guy as well, and wouldn't you know he has many brothers.... I can relate. Nice one.
Cheers
Kim

[Jeanette Cheezum]

Stephanie, I think I was married to the same guy. (first husband) That's why we got a divorce. Good poetice 6.

[Stephanie]

Hi Lorianne! Than you for your comments :) emotional bank robbery is something I know about....lol

[Lorianne]

emotional bank robbery is such a good & telling description...well done!

[Stephanie]

Thanks Olive!!! It was easy to write. I just let the words flow :)

[Olive Rosehips]

Wow! Possibly your best stuff right here! OMG, I have met this guy but he was a girl...man you said all that I felt about the monotone and the robot. Good stuff, girl!