Her / Him

  "That wasn't very nice."

  "What wasn't?" 

  "What you just said, of course."  

  She and he maintain eye contact.   

   Neither blinks.

   "Ask me if I give a damn."

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Comment by Mark L. Torrey on April 18, 2013 at 1:32pm

oh yeah, very good summation of nearly any argument ever held between partners ....

Comment by Joe Gensle on February 10, 2013 at 11:27pm

ouch-- deal breaker, couch sleeper! 

Comment by Mike Handley on February 10, 2013 at 8:29pm

Nice. I kind of prefer "Ask me how many fucks I do not give?" ;-)

Comment by Deborah Jovan Reed on February 10, 2013 at 10:17am

I would think the first is the 'her' but I like it because really it could have been either. Nice, concise 6S.

Comment by Other on February 10, 2013 at 6:30am

Nice flash piece, contains potentials.  I feel it ticking.

Comment by Angela on February 10, 2013 at 4:36am

You paint a portrait of either a bad day, or the nature of an unhappy relationship.  Again, very concise, which can pose its own det of problems.  I would have enjoyed knowing more.

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