What can YOU say in six sentences?
Harvey
Harvey stopped pumping gas long enough to take a bullet to the chest.
The man stood over him and asked where the money was.
He assured Harvey that, if he helped out, he'd call 911 and get an ambulance here as soon as he had cash in hand.
Harvey assumed, something no one should ever do.
Harvey told the man where the money was.
The man put a second bullet in Harvey.
The man stood over him and asked where the money was.
He assured Harvey that, if he helped out, he'd call 911 and get an ambulance here as soon as he had cash in hand.
Harvey assumed, something no one should ever do.
Harvey told the man where the money was.
The man put a second bullet in Harvey.
Comment
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Comment by Allie on April 26, 2011 at 11:09pm -
Very powerful opening sentence
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Comment by Stephen Torelli on April 26, 2011 at 5:45pm -
Today's crimnals ain't like they used to be! A gripping tale.
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Comment by Robert McEvily on April 26, 2011 at 5:13pm -
Hopefully the gunman falsely assumed too, and it turns out it takes three shots to take out Harvey. ;)
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