From Virgin To Whore On a Warm, Cloudless Night In Late May

[Robert Crisman]

When I was 14, a lot of the street kids downtown that I hung with turned tricks, so I kind of knew what was shaking and baking when I saw this bank-clerk kind of a guy, scoping me out of the sides of his eyes in the Penny Arcade down on First.

I moseyed on out to the sidewalk in front and, sure enough, he came out too and stood there a moment, and then sort of sidled on up to hello, the way that tricks do when they're testing the water to see if it's safe to go in.

So then, tiny talk, he's Jim and I'm Rob, and yakkety-yak, and then he gets to what's on his mind, and I set the street rate, and off we go to a flop two blocks up, and we climb the steps to a room with a bed and a dresser, and I want the money in front and he pays, and now it's down to it.

I lie on the bed with my feet on the floor and my pants at my ankles; he kneels with his eyes shut and takes me.

I feel a bit...bemused, I guess, right at first, and maybe nervous he'll bite me or something, but no, just wet warmth and it feels kind of good, though I don't quite get what the point of this is, and I think about asking how long it will take, and then--I feel this tickle down there and it's spreading...slowly...down toward my toes...through my sphincter and into my belly...my chest and--God, it's a current now, zit-zit-zit, zit-zit-zit, zit-zit-zit, Jesus--and then a torrent, rolling right through me, my arms, up my neck and my face is aflame, and my brain, man--every last synapse now, every last neuron, my whole fucking body, licked, licking, liquid, on fire, and --ka-BLAM, hit the moon...

,,,and come back to earth like snow falling on velvet...

And that's how I went from virgin to whore on a warm, cloudless night in late May.

[Kristine_ES]

can't add much more than what's already been said, i especially liked gita's reply.

 

[Mike Handley]

Damn. I mean ... Damn. Fine job, Homes.

[Gita]

"licked, licking, liquid. "   almighty gods of language that's good.

[Joey Delgado]

I love the 'it's a current now...'  leading into a torrent, because that's what it is. Great six. :)

[Sandra Davies]

Virgin to whore via bemused.   Wow.   And especially what Bill says.

[Teresa]

I had to laugh at the last sentence, because I heard in my head "And class, that's how..."  I know you're okay with all this.  It's story now.  And you also know I want you to write it, the whole thing, and send that puppy off so there'll be bidding wars over it.  And man, your "ka-BLAM" description was a bingo.  Not that I've ever had sex or anything.

[Angela]

Now don't that beat hell outta of every end of virginity story you ever heard?

I know that these circumstances are probably upsetting to some folks (age, money), but Peep, anyone who doesn't see the humor, too, is just an asshole.

Wish we had a read-aloud option.  People are missing a lot, I think - from you and many other authors.