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Departure
The last time I was dying did not hurt this much; less pain resided inside of me back then.
Just before you die, all the sediments of pain raise and morph into a whirlwind which only intent is to leave you. That separation hurts even more than harboring the anguish, but this time I endure. After the agony of the detachment is over, the pain is gone. If I could feel, I would rejoice. But, I can not; I am gone, too.
Just before you die, all the sediments of pain raise and morph into a whirlwind which only intent is to leave you. That separation hurts even more than harboring the anguish, but this time I endure. After the agony of the detachment is over, the pain is gone. If I could feel, I would rejoice. But, I can not; I am gone, too.
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Comment by Jelena on September 28, 2009 at 9:18am -
Thanks, Quin.
It was not metaphorical, Dan, but it could be.
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Comment by Dan Djurdjevic on September 28, 2009 at 5:04am -
I wondered whether the "death" was metaphorical. Works well either way.
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