What can YOU say in six sentences?
What distance am I from the tree? Oh how far I’ve fallen. But did I fall or did something let go? Bruised, trampled upon, will no one pick me up? Go into the ground and wait, for what happens next is anyone’s guess. I don’t believe I’ll return.
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I don't sense any anxiety from this voice. No anxiety about distance from the tree, distance fallen, how the fall happened or why no one comes to the rescue. There is no anxiety about what happens next or the possibility of never returning. If only humans were so accepting of unknowns. A+
Comment by Other on August 31, 2012 at 11:50am At least there are brethren, also fallen, near. Look out! Here comes Freddie.
Comment by Gita on August 31, 2012 at 10:21am ... is it just for the moment we live? What's it all about when you sort it out, Alfie...
I couldn't really comment on this because I didn't understand why an apple seed would doubt it's prospects for germination and growth. Once again, I am a bear of little brain.
Comment by Paul de Denus on August 31, 2012 at 10:05am Nature, spiritualism, death, nothing... when these things are upon us, the mind searches for some sort of answer that never comes. What's it all about Alfie?
Comment by Bill Floyd on August 31, 2012 at 8:54am Fell too far from the tree? I agree with Lapham, this is crazy deep to have so few words.
Oh I dont believe he will either.
at first i thought it was a newton play, but the process is an interesting one of apple seeds and their cycle.
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