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What can YOU say in six sentences?
All Points Bulletin: 30-35 Year-Old, 5’9’’-6’ Armed Caucasian Male
My eyes ain’t blue. I ain’t what they said. I work alone; no gun.
Bank of America comin' up on my left, just like yesterday, only the parkin' lot's nearly empty, fewer witnesses.
No one ever asked me, but if they was to, it ain’t the child support I give her, or the coke I like.
Just hungry--- that’s all.
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Comment by Joey Delgado on July 31, 2012 at 2:02am -
Gritty, six sentence noir. Love this. The last line is especially killer.
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Comment by Paul de Denus on July 30, 2012 at 9:55pm -
Yes- love the voice too- the choice of BofA and their lack of lending since the bubble was a wise choice- take what you can get:)
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Comment by bolton carley on July 30, 2012 at 8:22pm -
i never fail to be amazed by the voice of your characters.
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