He stood with military erectness, his right arm angled in farewell salute to the contents of the flag draped box before him. A solitary tear wound down his left cheek, following familiar paths. This was his last son, his last gift to the country of his fathers. He had nothing left to give. An uncaring gust of wind lifted the edge of the flag and, ballooning under it, threw it onto the dirt. The old man  lowered his arm and turned away.

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Comment by Robert Morschel on July 14, 2012 at 9:15am

Thanks for the kind comments.

Comment by Stephen Torelli on July 14, 2012 at 1:17am

Sons of glory, yet glory is fleeting/Sons of honor, and honor is forever. Excellent work.

Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on July 13, 2012 at 4:01pm

We see so much of that here in the Tidewater/Hampton Roads area. I have been there for family and friends. You made me sad on this 6.

(Hampton Roads is the largest Naval Installation in the world).

Comment by Edward Dean on July 13, 2012 at 11:33am

Powerful message and emotional picture in this RM.

So very well crafted!

Comment by Scarlett Rose on July 13, 2012 at 8:17am

This is stunning. So simply worded, and that's often the best and most effective writing. Thank you for this.

Comment by bolton carley on July 12, 2012 at 9:57pm

this broke my heart.  you managed to set a picture in my mind and made me cringe.

Comment by Gita on July 12, 2012 at 9:06pm

Some view it as a gift to the country. Some view it as throwing lives away.  But you can't say that patriotism is a myth to those who view it as a high sacrifice. Very sad.

 

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