The 6S Social Network
What can YOU say in six sentences?
All Aplologeez...
Her dad asked 'are you treating him well, or are you giving him a hard time?' She said we're fine and when i do yell at him i always say i'm sorry afterwords. 'You never once said your sorry to me Adrienne for all those years you treated me like complete shit.' She looked at him in the eyes and said with all sincerity 'i'm sorry. i'm sorry. i'm sorry'...twenety-two times.
It was time to go and Adrienne, walking off the porch smiled and said in an upbeat tone, 'sorry bout that!'
It was time to go and Adrienne, walking off the porch smiled and said in an upbeat tone, 'sorry bout that!'
Comment
-
Comment by Jon Eastwood on September 22, 2009 at 9:57am -
its a true story.
-
Comment by alisa rynay haller on September 21, 2009 at 4:38pm -
jon, I think this piece had some real potential. I got lost with the dad saying adrienne had treated her like crap, that would have been good to add another few sentences (even tho they'd be run-ons) , otherwise, I like the content. Sorry just doesn't cut it sometimes does it?
© 2013 Created by Robert McEvily.
Powered by
You need to be a member of The 6S Social Network to add comments!
Join The 6S Social Network