What can YOU say in six sentences?
He expected her to do everything for him--cook, clean, fetch and carry--while he watched TV. She liked to sit at the computer and chat to her friends, but he complained. The more he complained,the more she found the need to chat to her friends. He complained more and more, "you're becoming consumed by that computer", he grumbled. And that is just what happened, she let the computer consume her totally. He left his seat in front of the television and sat at the computer waiting for her to return.
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Comment by Diana E. Backhouse on November 1, 2012 at 2:44pm Other - our computer and TV are in different rooms, so I hadn't thought of that. I somehow imagined him sitting waiting in front of a blank screen.
Comment by Other on November 1, 2012 at 11:47am He could probably still see the tv from the seat at her computer. Ha. Nicely done.
Comment by Diana E. Backhouse on October 31, 2012 at 3:35pm Nor I, Robert.
Comment by Robert Crisman on October 31, 2012 at 2:16pm Can't say as I blame her.
Comment by Diana E. Backhouse on October 31, 2012 at 10:27am Thanks for your comments, Stephen and Beth.
Comment by Beth Overmyer on October 30, 2012 at 6:47pm Good one <3
Comment by Stephen Torelli on October 30, 2012 at 6:05pm
Comment by Diana E. Backhouse on October 30, 2012 at 3:00pm Maybe they will, Bill.
Is it, Gita? What's so different? I'd like to know where I went right!
Thank you, Joey.
I'm so pleased you liked it, Teresa.
She was starving. She found a way to get fed. He got jealous. Selfish men don't like to share. I love this piece, Diana. It's slim and cuts down to the bone. It's real. Faved.
Comment by Joey Delgado on October 30, 2012 at 11:12am
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