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I keep remembering that time we drove the beach in the mid of winter to watch the sunrise. I think we both knew it was over then, but those moments, when it was just us and the seagulls, they let us keep pretending. I want to tell you I'm sorry, but I'm not sure it's true. Instead, I tell you about the weather here, and my new t-shirt. Because if I let you go, I'm afraid the memories will fall away as well, like those grains of sand I so casually shook from my hair. But I guess we both know, holding on too tight has always been my forte.
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Comment by Scarlett Rose on March 5, 2009 at 8:53am -
mmm i like your simile...
like those grains of sand...
lovely.
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Comment by Lorianne on February 28, 2009 at 9:22pm -
i liked this one...the grains of sand...nice!
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Comment by Tiger on February 28, 2009 at 11:55am -
Real emotion most of us have felt. I almost feel the wind and the waves in your tempo. Well done.
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