What can YOU say in six sentences?
Daddy hates the president, he says this is all the president's fault.
After I'm supposed to be asleep, I hear him fighting with mama in their bed.
Daddy used to take me to the playground but now he mostly just talks back to the TV.
I told him he could sell back my trampoline if it would help, and that was the first time I ever seen my daddy cry.
Daddy hates the president and he's been cleaning all his guns.
He says he's doing this all for me, and if he can't get to the president he can at least get to the president's kind.
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Comment by Mike Handley on May 19, 2012 at 9:27am Sobering Oswaldian prose. Well done, Bill, and I love the tag.
Comment by Brittany on May 19, 2012 at 7:58am sad, scary and so close to non-fiction these days. powerful as usual.
Comment by Angela on May 18, 2012 at 9:57pm I guess this could really be happening somewhere.
Duck and cover, readers, this one's hitting close to home.
Ouch.
Whoa!!
Comment by Gita on May 16, 2012 at 12:36pm You've tapped into something nonfiction here. I wonder why these same people didn't clean their guns for the president who got us into these messes. Excellent and scary six.
Very nice Bill. Especially loved the closing line...
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