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The dream
She woke up screaming, it was that same dream. Everything started black, and then there was the blinding light, as white as fresh fallen snow. And then she would hear it, a sweet melody, slowly getting quieter as the light grew brighter, until it was but a whisper. Worst of all was what came next, a peaceful silence, followed by a piercing scream, so mournful and terrifying that it echoed in her for the rest of the day.
She longed for someone to hold her, just let her know it would be ok, but that wasn’t an option. There was no one to call.
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Comment by eloise toomath on April 25, 2012 at 11:53pm -
Sadness, fright, being alone, but ... a name to call is GOD, I know .
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Comment by Angela on April 25, 2012 at 9:45pm -
I always enjoy hearing of the dreams of others. Your narrator had quite a memorable one, which you described well.
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Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on April 25, 2012 at 9:26pm -
It will come to you in a dream. :)
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Comment by Emma Ash on April 25, 2012 at 7:49pm -
Thanks :) I'm considering expanding it, but I'm not sure where it's going yet.
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Comment by Stephen Torelli on April 25, 2012 at 7:12pm -
No one? Loneliness will do it. Excellent account.
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Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on April 25, 2012 at 3:00pm
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You could really make this one something larger. Peaked my curiosity.
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Comment by bolton carley on April 25, 2012 at 1:49pm -
the ending definitely worked as depressing. wow.
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