What can YOU say in six sentences?
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Her sashay excited the room. No man unable to gawk. She slid out a cigarette. Watched them scamper to ignite. She’d just play it cool. Keep as many in the room before she escaped to hit the detonator.
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Ka-Boom. This is what noir was meant to be.
In the beginning it was drilled into me...write succinct, but that doesn't mean everyone has to. I just don't use a lot of purple prose. I admire people that do their own thing.
I try to tell my 6S's like this - brief and beautiful - but never seem to make it. Like I just wrote one and aimed to for 'short', was nowhere near close. ;D
Deborah, this was a nice comment to wake to.
short and sweet with a ... hmm, i lost the word but it made me think of the music video from Garbage, 'The World Is Not Enough'... gave me a warm happy feeling inside. Thanks, nice 6S to wake up to.
Thanks, Robert and Angela.
Pow!! Great scene, J.
Ka-boom! Good one!
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