Dressed To Kill

[Jeanette Cheezum]

Her sashay excited the room. No man unable to gawk. She slid out a cigarette. Watched them scamper to ignite. She’d just play it cool. Keep as many in the room before she escaped to hit the detonator.

[Gita]

Ka-Boom. This is what noir was meant to be.

[Jeanette Cheezum]

In the beginning it was drilled into me...write succinct, but that doesn't mean everyone has to. I just don't use a lot of purple prose. I admire people that do their own thing.

[Deborah Jovan Reed]

I try to tell my 6S's like this - brief and beautiful - but never seem to make it. Like I just wrote one and aimed to for 'short', was nowhere near close.  ;D

[Jeanette Cheezum]

Deborah, this was a nice comment to wake to.

[Deborah Jovan Reed]

short and sweet with a ... hmm, i lost the word but it made me think of the music video from Garbage, 'The World Is Not Enough'... gave me a warm happy feeling inside.  Thanks, nice 6S to wake up to.

[Jeanette Cheezum]

Thanks, Robert and Angela.

[Angela]

Pow!!  Great scene, J.

[Robert Crisman]

Ka-boom! Good one!