Her sashay excited the room. No man unable to gawk. She slid out a cigarette. Watched them scamper to ignite. She’d just play it cool. Keep as many in the room before she escaped to hit the detonator.

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Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on February 26, 2012 at 12:42pm

HAHA Thanks Paul.

Comment by Paul de Denus on February 26, 2012 at 12:19pm

Always enjoy the brevity of pieces- you 'smoked' them and us. Nice Jeanette

Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on February 26, 2012 at 9:53am

Ed  thanks :)

Comment by Edward Dean on February 26, 2012 at 8:49am

"Scamper to ignite" and then got ignited!

Fun 1 Jeanette.

Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on February 25, 2012 at 11:09pm

Toby, I think it's on the border of  insanity. :) Thanks!!!

Comment by Toby Tucker Hecht on February 25, 2012 at 9:33pm

What a mind, Jeanette!!!  Great surprise.

Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on February 25, 2012 at 8:05pm

Thank you Mike

HAHA  Thanks "T" you didn't forget. (Scorpion)

Comment by Teresa on February 25, 2012 at 6:49pm

I was just thinking about female power earlier today, this power misused.  You stated it perfectly.  I love it when you get all dark on us.  You Scorpio, you.

Comment by Mike Handley on February 25, 2012 at 6:39pm

Excellent, Jeanette.

Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on February 25, 2012 at 5:55pm

Thanks Gita.

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