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Tick by Cynthia Anne
His heart was pounding. With each step, he could hear the ticking of the minutes. Seconds, minutes, moments, all fading away. All he could think of was what lay ahead. A fate crowned with red. A poor end to a little white rabbit.
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Comment by Bill Floyd on October 6, 2010 at 10:04am -
Tight. Good work, and welcome to the party!
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Comment by M C Funk on October 6, 2010 at 9:01am -
Captivatingly clever work from a royal lady. You bring fresh excitement to a classic tale that's a favorite of mine. Thanks for letting us run for awhile in a pair of rabbit's feet that may not be so lucky after all.
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Comment by Cynthia Anne on October 5, 2010 at 8:20pm -
That's high praise coming from you!! Thanks!
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Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on October 5, 2010 at 7:00pm -
HAHA YA GOT ME!
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Comment by Deborah Mackto on October 5, 2010 at 6:58pm -
I think you just joined the ranks of the talented, Cynthia Anne.
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Comment by Cynthia Anne on October 5, 2010 at 4:51pm
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Elspeth, thank you so much for your comment on my story. It was my first attempt and I was very nervous since I see so much talent here.
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Comment by Gina Marie on October 5, 2010 at 3:28pm -
Lovely 6s!
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