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Saulo exits the bathroom, refreshed. All eyes are on him as he walks down the pool hall aisle carrying a backpack which weighs a ton right about now. As if everybody knows he just made a deal with the devil. He grows more confident with every approving glance and encouraging wink he receives on his way out. Suddenly, he feels connected. A connection to a source he is too young to comprehend, and too desperate to care.
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Comment by Brittany on June 25, 2010 at 12:05pm -
"... too desperate to care." great piece!!
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Comment by Angela on June 25, 2010 at 10:51am -
I echo Jeanette. Sounds like the beginning of something.
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Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on June 25, 2010 at 10:13am -
Great 6. Mystery or suspense? Possibillites are endless.
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