What can YOU say in six sentences?
The Gaps
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Comment by Keith Grover on July 24, 2009 at 9:55am -
The Tube netwrk is a lot deeper than most people realise.
They're always advising us to 'Mind the gap'.
Let the train take the strain!
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Comment by Scarlett Rose on July 16, 2009 at 9:17pm - I like this - clever. And an astute observation.
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Comment by mal on July 15, 2009 at 10:14pm - Yes the focus on the gaps, gives rise to the possibility of even more imagination , as we consider the unsaid word , or the chance that you want more ....enjoyed it too....
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Comment by Tom Evans on July 15, 2009 at 2:28pm - Yes, the biggest gap is the sense and need for a sequel ...
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Comment by alisa rynay haller on July 15, 2009 at 1:38pm - NOT NEARLY enough, but that was the point, wasn't it?
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Comment by Angel Zapata on July 15, 2009 at 12:13pm - Yes, the negative space between each word and line is equally important. It's where the music and muses pause for breath. Great observation, Tom. Enjoyed this.
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Comment by Arthur Dubrul Daniels on July 15, 2009 at 11:38am - Tom..... 'nuf said! I think it was Miles Davis who said that there is no such thing as a a wrong note. It's the following note that makes or breaks the "Wrong" one....... as to the gaps.. the unsaid, the negative space created by each new element in a painting, the fermata in written music are all indeed a gift to the receiver's imagination, allowing unlimited time for contemplation, and best of all, anticipation. If you haven't already, check out, "Zen Guitar" by Philip Toshio Sudo. ISBN 0-684-83877-X....Arthur
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