Lost

[Erin Cole]

I pulled into the gas station, distraught and totally out of my mind about what happened to my friends. The local newspaper headed the story: Hikers Lost, Search Party Continues. They’d found two of the girls, Jessica Avery and Melanie Diaz, half-dead by the river, but the other girl, Sheryl Reynolds, they suspected had drowned, so they’d begun dredging the canal. But they weren’t going to find anything in those cold, deep waters. Sheryl Reynolds was dead, at least to me. She’d been given a chance to start over.

[Della]

powerful.
a little disturbing but powerful all the same.

[JMac]

Very nice. Very tight.

[masood]

yess. it blows me into the scene,but it cutted out :(

[Bob Clay]

A flawless diamond.

[Laurita]

Erin, I love seeing that you have posted something new.
This six is bursting at the seams with more to tell.

[John Wiswell]

Definitely feels like the tip of something much bigger.

[Scarlett Rose]

I agree with Toby - WOW!

[Lorianne]

erin...just when i thought i knew which was your best piece..you produce something like this & i have to realign my 'erins best stuff' universe.

[Olive Rosehips]

this is one of those times when I could have sworn I'd read so much and I look back and see the small space of a paragraph. This is semi-intense and full of possibilities.

[Toby Tucker Hecht]

Wow...this is the beginning of a novel, no doubt. Terrific tension and a great resolution.